i dont like how it looks appart from you trying hard to improve you sit around a table with a desk lamp and a pen in hand wondering how can i make this picture better but you knowing that you dont know what to do.. and also having no time at all anymore for your self.
because i expected an art college to be the place where you can improve but that is not happening i think, they give "US" the so called homework of what writting and essay on art history and what good is this so called national diploma course if were not actauly doing anything appart from write and write and write and possibly inbetween crappy fine art graphics session with shi